I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Mirror mirror mirror mirror sat on the wall, please try and make the coolest kid of them all This girl with the hair better beware cause everywhere she be I'ma be there like... Hello my name is Zuzie thats Zuzie with the Z
Kia ora Chevelle. I agree that you have a good voice so singing would be perfect for you. Are there things you could be doing at the moment to help with your singing? It would be good if you were posting more of your learning to your blog and also if someone could show you how to resize slides so they aren't too big within your blog. I don't know why Blogger is like that.
Hi Chevelle, theres no reason that you couldn't be a scuba diving singer. Do not limit yourself within your mind. All things are possible to she who believes. I hope that you will get to experience these activities. Did you know that James went and did snorkling lessons, just 3 weeks ago. He said he loved it.Anyways I just wanted to ask if you could share any lockdown stories with us teachers on your blog. IDEA, about this slide. Could you record you singing along with that guy and then add that to your post?Stay awesome and be kind.
Hi Chevelle I loved this blog post because it everything I can think of but not the singers because I don't listen to songs that much and I can't even think what to say about the scuba divers.
Kia ora Chevelle, I like the way you put facts on at the end. I think you should put embed and small so you slides are not hanging. How did you know all the facts?
What Hamish said. But I really like this! You used lots of color, and descriptive words, and you used lots of vibrant color too, and pictures, and... Ok, I think the list of good things about this slide is endless!! But maybe just limit the slide size, as I said before. Also, where did you get those rose PNG on the title slide? It's really pretty!
Kia Ora Chevelle! I really like all the pictures in there and the fonts! And also the way you added your favourite song in! And the swimming when want to grow up! Never give up on anything you approve! It will always be in you, deep down in you! Believe in what you believe! maybe add some more detail?
Kia Ora Chevelle :) It is true your singing voice is incredible I love the fact that you put so something else you want to be as well when you grow up! I think you should bring the size of slide down a little bit so i could read some of the scuba diver facts What else do you want to be if you cant be a scuba diver??? kai kite! - your friend Aimee
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Mirror mirror mirror mirror sat on the wall, please try and make the coolest kid of them all
ReplyDeleteThis girl with the hair better beware cause everywhere she be I'ma be there like...
Hello my name is Zuzie thats Zuzie with the Z
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The slide thing is going off the page
Ashaswi, have you been through the positive blog commenting slide? It's about being positive, thoughtful and helpful. Relevant is also a good idea.
DeleteKia ora Chevelle.
ReplyDeleteI agree that you have a good voice so singing would be perfect for you. Are there things you could be doing at the moment to help with your singing?
It would be good if you were posting more of your learning to your blog and also if someone could show you how to resize slides so they aren't too big within your blog. I don't know why Blogger is like that.
Hi Chevelle, theres no reason that you couldn't be a scuba diving singer. Do not limit yourself within your mind. All things are possible to she who believes. I hope that you will get to experience these activities. Did you know that James went and did snorkling lessons, just 3 weeks ago. He said he loved it.Anyways I just wanted to ask if you could share any lockdown stories with us teachers on your blog. IDEA, about this slide. Could you record you singing along with that guy and then add that to your post?Stay awesome and be kind.
ReplyDeleteOh yeah, and maybe you could adjust the slide size.
ReplyDeleteHi Chevelle I loved this blog post because it everything I can think of but not the singers because I don't listen to songs that much and I can't even think what to say about the scuba divers.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Chevelle,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put facts on at the end. I think you should put embed and small so you slides are not hanging. How did you know all the facts?
What Hamish said. But I really like this! You used lots of color, and descriptive words, and you used lots of vibrant color too, and pictures, and... Ok, I think the list of good things about this slide is endless!! But maybe just limit the slide size, as I said before. Also, where did you get those rose PNG on the title slide? It's really pretty!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Chevelle!
ReplyDeleteI really like all the pictures in there and the fonts! And also the way you added your favourite song in! And the swimming when want to grow up! Never give up on anything you approve! It will always be in you, deep down in you! Believe in what you believe! maybe add some more detail?
Kia Ora Chevelle :)
ReplyDeleteIt is true your singing voice is incredible
I love the fact that you put so something else you want to be as well when you grow up!
I think you should bring the size of slide down a little bit so i could read some of the scuba diver facts
What else do you want to be if you cant be a scuba diver???
kai kite! - your friend Aimee