I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hola Riley here, this is great i love how you are teaching us what is wrong and right about comment and i love how you added the rainbow really cool but next time i think you could work on added more detail to your writing like how the rainbow i just want to know why i should do it! well i have to go bye.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
I enjoyed the part when you said how to comment like a boss the you have used are really good why did you write that ok bye
ReplyDeleteHola Riley here, this is great i love how you are teaching us what is wrong and right about comment and i love how you added the rainbow really cool but next time i think you could work on added more detail to your writing like how the rainbow i just want to know why i should do it! well i have to go bye.
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